Sunday 19 April 2009

How is emotion conveyed in Carol Ann Duffy's poem "Shooting Stars?"

"Shooting
Stars" is a poem about a victim of the Holocaust, an unnamed woman who is subjected to the
horrors of the Nazi army and the dehumanization of people in the service of the war. The poem
contains many emotional phrases, designed to show both the enormous brutality of the Holocaust,
and the unimaginable pain felt by the "undesirable" prisoners.


After I no longer speak they break our
fingers
to salvage my wedding ring. Rebecca Rachel
Ruth
Aaron Emmanuel David...

The narrator is
matter-of-fact, explaining the situation in simple terms to show how she must disassociate
herself in order to remain sane. This dissociation is in itself almost worse than a melodramatic
narration, as it allows the reader's imagination to fill in the blanks between her words. The
list of names has no punctuation; this shows how it is endless, continuing long past the time
when the narrator "no longer speaks."  The worst thing here is that she may not be
dead, simply comatose or in shock, and the soldiers broke her fingers anyway.


After immense suffering someone takes
tea on the lawn.
After the terrible moans a boy washes his
uniform.
After the history
lesson
children run to their toys the world
turns in its sleep the
spades shovel soil Sara Ezra€¦

This stanza shows how
uncaring the soldiers, and their families, were towards the human life of their prisoners. It
might be interesting to compare this stanza, which allows the "civilized" Nazis their
minor comforts (tea, toys) after engaging in atrocities, to the novel The Boy in the
Striped Pyjamas
, where the families and even the Nazi soldiers themselves showed more
guilt.

Tell them I sang the ancient psalms at
dusk
inside the wire and strong men wept.
(Duffy,
"Shooting Stars," eyemouthhigh.org.uk)

The
narrator wishes to be remembered, even after her death, not as a rebellious hero who fought
against the Nazis with her body, but as an individual who remained strong and refused to bow in
her mind. Her plea is aimed directly at the reader (although she prefaces this stanza
"Sisters"), to call upon all of society to never forget. The emotions created by this
poem are more up to the reader's personal connection; the narrator lays out one experience, one
terrible event, and allows the reader to imagine the many millions of similar
events.

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